tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post8286927731000164419..comments2023-09-03T04:29:24.818-05:00Comments on poesophical bits: My Other The CarPhilip Thrifthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post-89378280174527961382008-11-18T14:57:00.000-06:002008-11-18T14:57:00.000-06:00Wow, I agree with everybody's comments. The male ...Wow, I agree with everybody's comments. The male world, the aggression, the power of it...<BR/><BR/>I really like the fact that the narrator is an inanimate object, and then being human waking up from that dream in the end. Powerful piece. Thank you for sharing!<BR/><BR/>I also want to thank you for visiting my poetry journal! :)Ambiguitylotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post-63078072952369237622008-11-14T06:45:00.000-06:002008-11-14T06:45:00.000-06:00...red lights, green lights, speeding through the ......red lights, green lights, speeding through the dark nights, speeding through the pouring rain...<BR/>R Dean Taylor. <BR/><BR/>Love the energy here and glad it was only a dream - but you know dreams can be warnings too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post-61361345650266605622008-11-14T01:48:00.000-06:002008-11-14T01:48:00.000-06:00this was a really great flat out stream-of-conscio...this was a really great flat out stream-of-consciousness ride... loved itRob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post-8205971648789864062008-11-13T14:11:00.000-06:002008-11-13T14:11:00.000-06:00You transported me to the world of males in this p...You transported me to the world of males in this poem. The car's fears, and persona, come across as being full of aggression, a desire to power through it all.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5092996210304232071.post-42876710533373167762008-11-13T10:15:00.000-06:002008-11-13T10:15:00.000-06:00Very vivid fear. Somehow while reading it transfer...Very vivid fear. Somehow while reading it transfered to me.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/11/illuminated-fear-susurrates.html" REL="nofollow">illuminated fear susurrates</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com