Sunday, April 26, 2009

Hardscrabble






The nascent cadence of crystalline veins

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Impossible piggybanks leaking lunacy brains

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Backwards specimens leaving wicked stains





for Read Write Poem: read write word #15 (a Wordle)


5 comments:

  1. Jeremiah's HouseApril 27, 2009 at 12:13 PM

    I like this, using all the words from the Wordle. Interesting making it a sort of equation.

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  2. Jessica GCApril 27, 2009 at 12:16 PM

    You are so talented. Turned out great!

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  3. Liz at Yips and HowlsApril 27, 2009 at 2:38 PM

    I like the equation format. It links these words in some stunning ways. I especially enjoyed the image - "leaking lunacy brains."

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  4. Wayne PitchkoApril 27, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    neat how you did the equation thing with the words...and thrift..eeeee as usual

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  5. Raven's Wing PoetryApril 29, 2009 at 12:14 PM

    Hrm. Interesting and a little different. I like this use of the words.

    -Nicole

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