At the beach, bums catching waves of salt- tasting foam, a pier jutting out seeking surfers bent low over their wash- boards picking up sand- dollar tips.
Happy Halloween to you. Hope to see you at our poetry potluck Halloween party tonight. Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in as soon as we are open, that’s how you get the best result of feedback. Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy! xxx
Oh that takes me right to the beach that I love! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful, better than a photo, your words.
ReplyDeletefabulous word flow.
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ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween to you.
Hope to see you at our poetry potluck Halloween party tonight. Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in as soon as we are open, that’s how you get the best result of feedback.
Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy!
xxx