Tuesday, May 26, 2009

O, to write some fiction


O, to write some fiction,

beginning serenely, and then dissolving
into conflict and crises until resolving
and then ending keenly.

But is life like fiction?

Or, is it random snippets of stories mixing
conflict and crises, never fixing —
fragments in search of a proper home?

In other words, very much like a poem.



posted to Read Write Poem prompt #76: changes (on the thought of a writer changing from writing poetry to fiction, or how the changes-in-life isn't like fiction)


8 comments:

  1. Life is much more like a poem than a story. Poetry is the best description of the world in my opinion, especially your perfectly crafted and so gently intelligent poetry.

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  2. Thanks!

    (One poem that came over from Poets.org today in my inbox (a "poem-a-day" mailing), Evasive Action is such a description, I think.)

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  3. Yes! This poem is exactly right. It's so hard to have grace and insight at the same time yet you do it with such apparent ease.

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  4. Ha! You have captured it exactly and in so few words. Bravo!

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  5. I just love this, and I couldn't agree more!

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  6. I had to chuckle after I read this. Life has no logic sometimes and only a basic structure to speak of - and that only dictated by the passing of time, biology, and our own cultural norms for each age of life. Good job.

    -Nicole

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  7. yes....i like this Phil.....hey its ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL fiction...unless you change it...then you cant change it

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