Friday, September 24, 2010

Equinox


I long again for cool day autumn breeze,
A sweater'd walk through parks of mottled leaves.
The noon's high-point marks midway path of sun,
But summer's heat, alas, not yet is done.
The day, once master, now shares time with night,
Whose breezes cool will soon subdue the light.




placed in Poets United Thursday Think Tank #16: Autumn


10 comments:

  1. MarySeptember 24, 2010 at 8:24 AM

    Yes, so very true....the day IS now longer master. (I like the way you wrote this.) Always saddens me when this change takes place.

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  2. Priyanka BhowmickSeptember 24, 2010 at 8:40 AM

    summer reigns the most. that's why i hate it . nicely penned

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  3. WeaselSeptember 24, 2010 at 9:19 AM

    I wish the summer heat would leave as well, it'd make my drive much more comfortable, lol! Wonderfully written post for the prompt! =)

    -Weasel

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  4. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 24, 2010 at 10:31 AM

    So well expressed. I love "will soon subdue the light".......well done.

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  5. DeborahSeptember 24, 2010 at 12:10 PM

    Wonderful, I loved this :o)

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    what a lovely time of the year.
    in really warm places the coolness is a blessings
    in cold ones, it is a reminder and time of beauty and feelings.
    or so i see it.

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  7. Carrie Van HornSeptember 24, 2010 at 2:56 PM

    Beautifully written....i love the flow and rhyme.
    :-)

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  8. RiikaInfinityySeptember 24, 2010 at 8:58 PM

    Love the last line especially, wonderfully written^^~

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  9. EllaSeptember 26, 2010 at 11:11 PM

    So beautiful and lyrical; I loved it~

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 28, 2010 at 11:28 PM

    lovely rhyme,
    delightful seasonal imagery.
    love reading it.

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