Saturday, April 30, 2011

dance floor


It was that plump rump
that turned my eye.
It would not be seen on another guy,
and it really made me jump.

That boy could dance
putting emotion in the motion
in spiriting rotation
in a Lady Gaga trance.


17 comments:

  1. madhumakhiMay 15, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    Yeah! Plump people can also dance. It's unfortunate that society has made stereotypes about them.
    I like the rhyme scheme too- perfect.

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  2. JZKnowles-SmithMay 15, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Very entertaining piece, I'm a sucker for quatrains and Lady Gaga references.

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyMay 15, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    Enjoyed the mental image of this one and the Lady Gaga reference:)

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  4. Weekly Itinerary:May 15, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    I thought this was pretty cute, I could see myself in this poem, spying a sexy guy as he danced! Love it!

    For more great poetry goodies and weekly prompts you might want to check out my little community I've just created:

    http://the-writers-cafe.blogspot.com/

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  5. MarianMay 15, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    i LOVE this, let's go dancing!!

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  6. AnonymousMay 15, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    Great sense of mood and place - I get it.

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  7. UnknownMay 15, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    HILARIOUS!

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  8. Liz Rice-SosneMay 15, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    This gave me a right - chuckle and quite a visual!

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  9. Eileen T O'Neill .....May 16, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    Philip,

    Lady Ga Ga can move everyone!!!

    Eileen

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  10. The PoetMay 16, 2011 at 4:13 PM

    Laughing...sorry, but you had me at the first 2 lines!

    Plump, round, thin, whatever, I say if you've got rhythm, flaunt it!

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 16, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    lovely humor.

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  12. Anna :o]May 17, 2011 at 3:10 AM

    Love it - men have lovely bums!

    Anna :o]

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  13. AnonymousMay 17, 2011 at 7:58 AM

    I've got the plumb gut, but alas the flat cheeks... smiles..

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  14. WeaselMay 17, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    Makes the reader chuckle a bit, lol. Really nicely written ^_^

    -Weasel

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  15. JinksyMay 17, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    dancing has no size limits! Or age, come to that...

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  16. Judy RoneyMay 19, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    So funny! I have never heard of "plump rump" before but I won't forget it now.

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  17. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMay 20, 2011 at 6:01 PM

    love your poetry talent here,

    inviting you to join Poets Rally by submitting a poem, any poem is welcome.

    hope to see you in.
    keep entertaining!
    You Rock!

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