From every stroke a feed of streams
that run throughout the sphere
of internetting clouds and teams
of current technogear.
They go by names—the streams, that is—
that brands their place to be
the kings of social network biz
that range from A to Z.
Of all the posts that do flow in
and sent electric'ly,
some subset only just begin
to wind way to me.
Then tap into that world, I say,
and send your bits of rhyme.
Who knows on whose crystal display
they'll spend a bit of time.
placed in the imaginary garden with real toads ~ Fireblossom Friday: Arrivals & Departures
The spent some time on my crystal display, and made me smile at how aptly you have captured modern communication in these lines.
ReplyDeleteA lot of coming and going in the blogosphere--and I'm grateful for the many arrivals that I've seen on my crystal screen.
ReplyDeleteVery clever, Philip!
ReplyDeleteGood one, Philip...I love the comings and goings in cyberspace:)
ReplyDeleteThis was good, good as in a great song is good! It gave me a wide smile. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteyeah, i love that, who knows who will spend time with your words? very nice.
ReplyDeleteYou've nailed the new world of communication perfectly, Philip. We send our words out, like notes in bottles, knowing only a few of the people who will read them.
ReplyDeleteKay, Alberta, Canada
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Now here's a source of a great many arrivals! Thanks for being part of my prompt!
ReplyDeletetrademark thrift - poetry and technology.clever mix this.
ReplyDeletetrue that...said in an interview the other day once it is posted i release it to the winds and you never know who it will hit at just the right time...
ReplyDeleteVery impressive! Brands and the kings of social networks --- you really captured this techno madness!
ReplyDeleteLovely...thanks for sharing this.
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