bridge: front-row seating;
all the real action's behind
(just my lucky day)
chekov: the playwright?
no, he just sits on my right
(we exchange glances)
photon torpedos?
would rather play with my sword
(you know what I mean)
helmsman's log: stardate
twenty-two sixty-nine — signed
lieutenant sulu
posted to Read Write Poem: hyperlink your poetry
Star Trek Haiku. I like.
ReplyDeleteand re-discovering the words. Bridge, I would'n thought at the command point...
ReplyDeletenicely written....although not a tv guy or trekky....dont really understand....dumb me hu
ReplyDeleteAwesome. I just saw the new Trek and loved it. Now going back and rewatching the old episodes. I can just see Sulu writing haiku while the Enterprise is on autopilot.
ReplyDeleteThanks all.
ReplyDeleteNote on hyperlinks: If you place the mouse over a word, like "bridge", a box will pop up as well with a brief definition. Here's the example code (change color and title as needed):
<a style="text-decoration:none;" href="http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/Bridge"><span style="color:#B2AD10;" title="The bridge is the starship equivalent of an operations center or command center and is generally located near the top and front of a vessel.">bridge</span></a>
Four Haiku, nicely done! and the naughty bits too!!
ReplyDeleteAlso, I like the hyperlink box thingy that springs up!!!
So Andy likes boxes, but Thrift's real action is elsewhere. What does Chekov like?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the movie and your poem is very clever.
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