before the lighted tapestry
hanging on the wall. Bolts
of the shimmering panel
emitting colors and grays
transfix his gaze.
His mind absorbs
its vibrant threads, while
holding the rosary
in his right hand,
caressing its beads,
pressing them
with his finger,
the beads transport him
to the stations
of the cross. Currents
of present and past
inextricably entwine,
each station bringing
a new meditation of
• fear | • storms | • passion |
• laughter | • pain | • sadness |
• suspense | • ecstasy | • feasting |
• | • jesus | • |
... 'til
his soul's
fulfilled.
Then,
•
the red bead –
rosary's last jade –
sends him back home and
the tapestry fades.
for read write poem prompt #46: sacred poetry
This is so theatrical, it transports me to 'Paddy's Wigwam' and I love the innovative way you've set the piece out. Also, the two blank stations and Jesus in the space between.
ReplyDeleteMagic!
Thanks!
ReplyDeleteNever ever having been Liverpudlian nor Catholic, I had to look up what 'Paddy's Wigwam' was :-)
Wonderful flowing language. You create the image of a person soothed by prayer and the repetition of the beads.
ReplyDeletenicely written and meditative
ReplyDeleteThis is a good take on the prompt. I really like the way you lay out the topics of meditation including the blank spaces of mystery.
ReplyDeleteThanks again for the comments.
ReplyDeleteBut I feel I need to make a confession. As for the meditation layout: it was just based on the layout of my remote control's bottom 12 buttons (some of the "rosary's beads"). The two blank buttons on the remote: I never use. As for the flat-panel wall-mounted TV screen ("the tapestry"): I don't have that yet - but I'm praying for it :-)
At bottom, I am pretty mundane.
• fear • storms • passion • laughter • pain • sadness • suspense • ecstasy • feasting • • jesus •
ReplyDeleteSheer poetry...
Hi Philip, glad you got the Paddy's Wigwam reference, I just came back to enlighten you. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis line break is brilliant!:
ReplyDeleteof the cross. Currents
of present and past
inextricably entwine,
Thanks 'Dot'. :-)
ReplyDelete• fear • storms • passion
ReplyDelete• laughter • pain • sadness
• suspense • ecstasy • feasting
• • jesus •
you can read this vertically or horizonatly and get two different rythms. like it...