U.S. President Barack Obama walks
the wintry path to the Oval Office
(photo: Jason Reed/Reuters)
1.
freshly fallen snow
ominously crookèd limbs
meeting south lawn's brush
lonely winter deer
a confident leader's walk
the White House: next stop
2.
camera's f-stop
aperture setting for snow
capturing O's walk
O's sauntering limbs
behind: a camouflaged deer
painting with broad brush
3.
from snow-dappled brush
dazzled doe comes to full-stop:
photograph's lone deer
ignoring brief snow
beneath the snow-laden limbs
the new leader walks
4.
the new leader walks
in front of snow-dappled brush
beneath snowy limbs
doe comes to full-stop
dappling January's snow:
photograph's lone deer
5.
background: hidden deer
foreground: leader's stately walk
f-stop set for snow
painting with broad brush
camera's shutter freeze-stops
O's sauntering limbs
6.
beneath crookèd limbs
walking past lone winter deer
the White House: next stop
the new leader walks
passing White House south lawn's brush:
freshly fallen snow
Haiku.
behind snowy limbs
a lone deer in frozen stop:
she brushes O's walk
a (haiku-)sestina using photo-inspired (not actually random) end-words: snow limbs brush deer walk stop
doubly prompted by read write poem's prompt #63: sestina, randomly (gypo) and totally optional prompts' Intersections (rfp)
Hi phil, this is so cool! As if a Sestina wasn't difficult enough to write you accelerate the form throwing Haiku at it! Amazing!
ReplyDelete6* Walk past / passing just a silly billy thought.
It looks like you've created a new form!
ReplyDeleteI loved the 'snow-dappled brush' and all the different things you did with limbs.
Thanks!
ReplyDelete(changed "past the" to "passing" in 6.5 — thanks STG!)
Hi Phil, I was thinking of 6.2 which I think is the only line that has a syllable too many.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, great concept!
Oh yea.
ReplyDeleteNow 6.2 is walking past lone winter deer (not "lonely")
Thnx again.
Just thinking: A haiku-sestina (above) is 13*17 = 221 syllables. The only reference I found to this number is
ReplyDelete"221 Syllables at Rocky Mountain Dharma Center", Allen Ginsberg, White Shroud: Poems 1980-1985, Harper and Row, 1986.
[13 Haiku on p. 41.]
(There must be something numerological about 221?)
Jaw dropping style. Love it.
ReplyDeleteJust amazing! I can't imagine how difficult this must have been to write!
ReplyDeleteHow clever and unusual. And the piece had such a rhythm that I could almost feel his footsteps and the urgency and energy.
ReplyDeletewith a wave and smile.... beautiful
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