Saturday, April 25, 2009

for

The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation.
Henry David Thoreau, Walden




the unrequited eyes
        of the brown-eyed barista I see in the store
small fortunes
        so stingily shared to scribblers like me
the athlete's flesh
        I had not too many years before
the time
        I wasted on selfish spree


for Read Write Poem: let's get metaphysical


4 comments:

  1. I like the concrete images you use to capture the mysteries of time passing.

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  2. some beautiful words used here - I love "unrequited eyes"

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  3. unrequited eyes and wasted selfish sprees. . . what an interesting poem that could use these very unrelated images.

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  4. The cadence and solemn tone give beauty to the regret expressed in the poem.

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