Thursday, September 9, 2010
A labyrinth of paths
"A labyrinth of paths" said Wittgenstein
about our native tongue. Perplexed, we are
as questions grow as we contemplate the stars:
where haphazardness is truth we crave design.
Old words, combined like bricks that built the walls
of Arkville Maze, confine us to false paths,
entrap us in dead ends. New words: be cast,
rebuild, and let old vocabularies fall.
placed in Poets United Think Tank #14: Walls
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"...let old vocabularies fall". I think that is one of the best lines I have ever read! SO well done!
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the prompt! =)
ReplyDelete-Weasel
Nicely said!
ReplyDeletePamela
love this.."let old vocabularies fall" - nice...bkm
ReplyDeleteyour poetry made me think... yes walls can be mazes that leads us up false paths...
ReplyDeleteCan I.....marry this poem?
ReplyDeleteAh, a maze! So many false fronts! A great metaphor!
ReplyDeletePhilip,
ReplyDeletea fantastic use of the Thursday Prompt.
New words, new paths, new future........
Moving on...
Wonderfully written :D~ love your words and image!^^~
ReplyDeleteProfound and very thought provoking ... well written!
ReplyDeleteVery nice expressions---.
ReplyDeletewise words.
ReplyDeletelovely penned.
my wall entry
Love the idea of letting old vocabularies fall!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful language and wise words...truly lovely poem. I love it! :-)
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and makes one ponder~ Great job!
ReplyDeleteIf words are the walls they are also the sledgehammers, nice take on the prompt.
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