Thursday, September 9, 2010

A labyrinth of paths


     


"A labyrinth of paths" said Wittgenstein
about our native tongue. Perplexed, we are
as questions grow as we contemplate the stars:
where haphazardness is truth we crave design.

Old words, combined like bricks that built the walls
of Arkville Maze, confine us to false paths,
entrap us in dead ends. New words: be cast,
rebuild, and let old vocabularies fall.




placed in Poets United Think Tank #14: Walls


16 comments:

  1. "...let old vocabularies fall". I think that is one of the best lines I have ever read! SO well done!

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  2. Wonderful take on the prompt! =)

    -Weasel

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  3. love this.."let old vocabularies fall" - nice...bkm

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  4. your poetry made me think... yes walls can be mazes that leads us up false paths...

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  5. Can I.....marry this poem?

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  6. Ah, a maze! So many false fronts! A great metaphor!

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  7. Philip,
    a fantastic use of the Thursday Prompt.
    New words, new paths, new future........
    Moving on...

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  8. Wonderfully written :D~ love your words and image!^^~

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  9. Profound and very thought provoking ... well written!

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  10. Love the idea of letting old vocabularies fall!!

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  11. Beautiful language and wise words...truly lovely poem. I love it! :-)

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  12. So beautiful and makes one ponder~ Great job!

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  13. If words are the walls they are also the sledgehammers, nice take on the prompt.

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