Wednesday, October 27, 2010

At the beach, bums


At the beach, bums
catching waves of salt-
tasting foam,
a pier jutting out
seeking surfers
bent low over their wash-
boards picking up sand-
dollar tips.


4 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 28, 2010 at 11:52 AM

    Oh that takes me right to the beach that I love! Wonderful!

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  2. AnonymousOctober 28, 2010 at 1:07 PM

    So beautiful, better than a photo, your words.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 31, 2010 at 5:52 PM

    fabulous word flow.

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallOctober 31, 2010 at 5:52 PM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/31/halloween-party-at-jingle-poetry-monday-poetry-potluck-tomorrow/

    Happy Halloween to you.
    Hope to see you at our poetry potluck Halloween party tonight. Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in as soon as we are open, that’s how you get the best result of feedback.
    Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy!
    xxx

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