Was I to be true to my given name•, I asked,
if horse would nag my every lifetime task?
Would I be bridled with the bit through every lap,
or hold my steed through every handicap?
But horse I soon began to quietly like, you see,
the studs that came undone and played with me,
and found I could not say neigh to that love. And I
just met my destiny with whinny sigh.
• Philip is "a given name, derived from the Greek Philippos (Φίλιππος)", meaning lover (or friend) of horses.
Placed in the imaginary garden with real toads. (Use your first name in a poem.)
Nomen est omen: the name is a sign ("true to its name").Photo: Daniel Radcliffe appears in Peter Shaffer’s “Equus”.
Great response to the prompt, Philip. (I couldn't help notice the pun in : if horse would nag...)
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Oh this is witty. I love it so much! Good one, Philip. Great image too.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem... a mighty name you have, Philip. I especially like:
ReplyDelete"Would I be bridled with the bit through every lap"
and
"the studs that came undone and played with me"
Oh this is witty. I love it so much! Good one, Philip. Great image too.
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ReplyDeleteGood stuff. I really like your manipulation of the language.
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(+1) now i want to write one like this. [runs off to research her name]
ReplyDeleteA great play on word throughout this, very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThis was really great! I love your name~
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