Saturday, October 8, 2011

Nomen est omen?





Was I to be true to my given name•, I asked,
if horse would nag my every lifetime task?
Would I be bridled with the bit through every lap,
or hold my steed through every handicap?

But horse I soon began to quietly like, you see,
the studs that came undone and played with me,
and found I could not say neigh to that love. And I
just met my destiny with whinny sigh.


• Philip is "a given name, derived from the Greek Philippos (Φίλιππος)", meaning lover (or friend) of horses.



Placed in the imaginary garden with real toads. (Use your first name in a poem.)
Nomen est omen: the name is a sign ("true to its name").
Photo: Daniel Radcliffe appears in Peter Shaffer’s “Equus”.


9 comments:

  1. Great response to the prompt, Philip. (I couldn't help notice the pun in : if horse would nag...)

    (Sorry about typo)

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  2. Oh this is witty. I love it so much! Good one, Philip. Great image too.

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  3. What a wonderful poem... a mighty name you have, Philip. I especially like:

    "Would I be bridled with the bit through every lap"

    and

    "the studs that came undone and played with me"

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  4. Oh this is witty. I love it so much! Good one, Philip. Great image too.

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  5. Good stuff. I really like your manipulation of the language.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  6. (+1) now i want to write one like this. [runs off to research her name]

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  7. A great play on word throughout this, very nicely done.

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  8. This was really great! I love your name~

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