Thursday, December 11, 2008

O Bárack! my Bárack!


"At night, before we'd go to sleep, Jack liked to play some records;
and the song he loved most came at the end of this record. The lines
he loved to hear were: Don't let it be forgot, that once there was
a spot, for one brief shining moment that was known as Camelot.

There'll be great Presidents again - but they'll never be another Camelot again."

from Theodore White's interview of Jacqueline Kennedy
in the December 6, 1963 issue of LIFE magazine




O Bárack! my Bárack! the battle-first is done,
A Camelot may never be again, but the White House race is won.
Rise up—you have the gift—to open this century's Frontier,
A millennial land still unexplored with hope instead of fear:
       Take heart, Bárack!
          The fear-ing nip at your heels,
             And try to rip the silver throat of yours,
                Above the presidential seal.

O Bárack! my Bárack! you've restored our future's zest
To value Human worth again over Neocons' failed quest,
And science, too, unfettered, will once again be treasured
Over medieval-agèd religion's fundamentalists' strict measure:
       Hear Bárack! Bárack!
             With your deft mind and hand
               Construct the edifice that withstands the storm
                  And not castle in the sand.



for read write poem prompt #56, panageric poems  (other poems)


4 comments:

  1. "With your deft mind and hand Construct the edifice that withstands the storm
    And not castle in the sand."

    I resonate your sentiment Phil -- we so much need him to succeed in setting a new direction of substance and possibility!

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  2. You were successful in constructing a Whitman-like flow in the lines. And the quote fits in very well: as if it was written specially to be the first stanza.

    I just hope some similarities stop here though ( Lincoln was a great man but the times were rough...

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  3. Oh, yes, you've nailed the tone here. Wonderful sound--makes you want to sing these lines!

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